Dont overload the rules text If your custom card needs 11 lines of text, consider one of these options: tighten wording use existing keyword phrasing where it makes sense split it into two cards accept that you are making a commander that is also a short story Keep readability as the goal Custom cards live on a table, not in a zoomed-in screenshot
You then attack for 8, and sacrifice the Hero with Callous Sell-Swords adventure, which effectively deals 16 and wins from there
Moonshaker Cavalry is solid if you can get the mana, but usually you want to be dropping Akromas Will when you have six or seven mana, not eight, with some leftover to play another creature or a removal spell
For example, if two creatures you control with lifelink deal combat damage at the same time, South Wind Avatar's last ability will trigger twice
Though they cost significantly more , these are also the most exciting ones to open, and are more likely to have the most valuable pulls in the whole set in them